Thursday, March 12, 2020

The Blazing Fire Comments

Rating: 4.7

Smoke swallows the sky
Blazing fire move stealthily
Through rows of houses
Taking precious possessions
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 13 May 2023

Blazing fire is definitely the greatest thief as it engulfs all properties, but when man came to know the use of fire, civilisations developed along with better processing of food and and industry.Both extremes are there Mam Rose..But the way of presentation in your finger tip is superb.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2020

It goes to show that the saying: “better to be robbed than to be burned“ is very true..... Excellent poem, dear ate Rose....10++❤️❤️❤️

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Susan Williams 18 March 2020

Succinct and heart-rendering- -that is a delicate balance to achieve and you've done so co, passionately. 10++++++++++++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2020

Poetry affects our heart and soul.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 March 2020

You have much eloquently pictured the danger the wild fires give out. Fire is a universal consumer. Nice imagery 10+

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Valsa George 15 March 2020

The tongues of fire can eat away everything in no time.....! Without water and fire, we cannot live. But they are the great destroyers too! In a wildfire, how much of our possessions are turned into ash and how much of life is charred down. A wild fire in a populated area results in the destruction of so much of material wealth and precious lives. Well composed!

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Anjandev Roy 15 March 2020

Excellent short work. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 March 2020

pollution of nature is the severe thief of human health! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2020

Fire! Fire! ! Destroying everything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shaun Cronick 12 March 2020

Absolutely spot on Rose Marie! ! I know of a old couple who years ago had their house burnt down. An electrical fault, thankfully no-one was hurt and they were insured but lost some priceless photo's of yesteryear. So fire is a great thief and is heartless and merciless. 10++ and added to my poems that touch a nerve favs. Thanks again and take care.

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Kostas Lagos 12 March 2020

A natural disaster depicted perfectly

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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