Thursday, September 10, 2015

The Blanket Comments

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What is hidden beneath your blanket of words that you’ve spread so evenly into my head?

A blanket of snow so white, like a sheet, it’s coming up off my feet, it’s falling off the bed
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Roseann Shawiak 11 September 2015

An intuitive feeling comes through each line of your poem, questions are silently being asked, but are not yet out in the open for discussion. Very excellent poem trying to determine if a person is lying to you or not! Spoken outright, but with imagery of snow being used as tact to discern the answer. Love this poem, it's unique! Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. RoseAnn

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