Monday, August 13, 2012

The Blame Beyond Reason Comments

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beyond reason the damage
done to the southern white
sensed as the nervous sky
keeps breathing in and out
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Elna Nel
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Valerie Dohren 18 August 2012

Great write, a sad portrayal of the shadow side of man.

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Ken E Hall 17 August 2012

Very good look at the haunting side of man it brings to mind Ghandi who won freedom for India with love...men who once as children talked and trumpled streets sadly there is no end in sight...regards

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Marilyn Lott 15 August 2012

The dark side of human nature described perfectly. Great job!

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Mark Normand 14 August 2012

Very deep subject that talks about the dark evil inside of man. Some grow jaded and have hearts as hard as stone who think nothing of harming the innocent. Good poem.

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