The Blade She Tightly Grips... Comments
running till she was gasping for air
she falls down, crumpling to her knees
crying out in only silent painful screams
from piled up hurt throughout her broken life
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Emotion, temptation! is what i can see in this lovely poem. first hand every understandable and realteable :) nice write keep it up: ] ~Bella
get up, and walk... you are strong, and gifted. good poetry!
Truly a beauty you have written here, every word you used was perfect. 'enticing her to give up, and to believe the lies opening her clenched hand, blood drips from the blade she already tightly grips... ' To good, my friend, to good....! ;)
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8/2/2025 5:20:26 AM # 1.0.0
I understand this poems emotions and I think that you are a great writer. Keep it up.