Sunday, August 2, 2009

The Blackness Is My Light Comments

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The blackness is my light
It consumes my every thought,
The sun is like an allergy
That will never disappear til twilight comes crawling.
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Saane Pahulu
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Ben Gieske 26 August 2009

Nice comparisons and contrasts.

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Beker john 04 August 2009

fantastic poem nice to read it 10

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Enya Wynants 03 August 2009

I really like this one, it's very deep. I think you're talented!

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