Thursday, June 4, 2015

The Black Widow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amidst the densest forest, in the darkest night.
Where on the forest floor the vermin creep
And in the sky only ravens fly
Lies the body of a lover
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Payal Priya
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Daniel Jones 28 March 2017

I was hooked from the beginning, you have a real skill for capturing the mood and clouds of the scenario, really loved this Payal, exceptional imagery here, the idea of his heart that once loved is oozing out onto her is just poetic magic, very worthy vote! ! !

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Payal Priya 29 March 2017

Thank you Daniel for appreciating my effort.This is my first creation as a poet and your comment on is truly encouraging..☺

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Siddartha Montik 28 March 2017

Wonderful Written / Narrated. Liked it! ! thanks for sharing deep meanings in such verses! ! 10+!

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Payal Priya 29 March 2017

Thank you for reading and giving your valuable comment☺

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2017

In the darkest night! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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