Saturday, October 29, 2011

The Black Void Comments

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</> The black void resides within me growing ever so strong
Refusing to abandon me, I've been it's home for so long
The black void is so cold and damp, it shows me little affection
It just consumes what is left of me like an unrelenting infection
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Patrick Villareal
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Tanya Engel 22 February 2013

VERY DEEP.... THE DARK PLACE IS VERY HARD TO LEAVE.... SOMETIMES ITS EASIER JUST TO STAY THERE AND NOT WORRY ABOUT EVERYTHING HAPPENING AROUND US... LOVELY WRITE...

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Dominic Paleee 01 November 2011

I totally feel you on this one bro! I know what you're talking about!

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Vipins Puthooran 30 October 2011

Excellent poem/written well.. I like the good expressions of this poem; ; ;

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