Monday, June 19, 2006

The Black Queen Comments

Rating: 4.5

The Black Queen walked down the street and we all bowed down
The Black Queen looked at me and there was no sound
The Black Queen fell down and dropped her own crown
The Black Queen went up and went down as she began to pound
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Debbie Fadoju
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Lisa Wilkinson 29 June 2006

Oh what a poor queen, such emotional words Debbie. Keep up the good work.Will keep viewing.xx

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Mary Nagy 22 June 2006

Interesting write here Debbie. It makes me wonder if the Black Queen sybolizes somebody in real life. Nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Angelica Abington 19 June 2006

wOW great poem Debbie...'All we could say is 'Oh Lord Oh Well'..Very powerful, its amazing how people react to tragic things...Keep up the good writing...Hope to read more from you...

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