Friday, September 9, 2005

The Black Mercedes Convertible Comments

Rating: 3.0

It was a beautiful Mercedes, two seater,
ebony black, the top stowed in the back,
I asked the clerk, blonde, young and shy,
if it was hers, and she, being a quickie,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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t. h. ashbury 09 September 2005

it is always those random moments... that make a day. this is beautifully captured. salut.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 September 2005

Guys, it really happened. Wright's Fruit Barn. But all is safe. H

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Mary Nagy 09 September 2005

THIS is the reason we were nervous when my daughter started working this summer! ! (Yes, Herbert, I'm kidding!) Nice poem, I'd even say romantic.........if you were 20. (sorry!) Sincerely, :) Mary

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Raynette Eitel 09 September 2005

I think you could get arrested for entertaining thoughts like that. (Not the car.) Raynette

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Allan James Saywell 09 September 2005

watch out for those young chicklets or was it the car that was the big attraction REGARDS ALLAN

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