Thursday, April 15, 2021

The Black Hands Of Death ~ Comments

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The black hands of death,
cannot hold the white thread of life.
Neither the sun nor the moon will bear witness to it.
The blowing wind will not pave way to snatch the memories.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 17 April 2021

DJ feels the same way. One should make the death meaningful.

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Michael Jack 16 April 2021

Smart poem. I see it in a graceful manner.

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Shreya Hacks 16 April 2021

All your good deeds will remain after death and will keep reminding. Great poem.

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Kostas Lagos 15 April 2021

Love it from the two first lines!

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Deepak S S 15 April 2021

The clouds will carry my thoughts all across the world And they will shower it time and again. And I will emerge by becoming a rainbow sometimes. Perhaps, those black hands will never catch the silver lines again.

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Deepak S S 15 April 2021

We fear death will wipe everything after our departure. No it can only wipe our body. Wonderful poem.

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Suzon Albert 15 April 2021

Last line linger in my mind and will remain, Powerful statement. Perhaps, those black hands will never catch the silver lines again.

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Ricky Manhatten 15 April 2021

All your poems will remain till the readers are alive.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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