Monday, May 11, 2015

The Black Freighter Comments

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I’d met Helga at the Seaman’s Rest
Where I said that I’d be her mate,
Sailing her ancient Freighter for her
Down to the River Plate.
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David Lewis Paget
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Douglas Scotney 11 May 2015

Tense. I love the rhyme, 'in' with 'again'. 'Sailing under a foreign flag' is topical David, as it reminds of big companies paying tax offshore. Hockey Joe can do, thinks he. I've been reading Heart of Darkness. Have a look at my 'SS Cannibalogic'

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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