Tuesday, June 21, 2022

The Black Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yr lips are redder than the sky at dusk
But yr eyes are blacker than the sea
I'll love you always
Though, you keep breaking my heart
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2022

A powerful poem of pain and heart ache no heart should go through! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2022

A deeply poignant and very touching story. Top Marks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2022

I hope and pray that this heartrending poem is just a figment of one's imagination. No woman should be subjected to any abuse or domestic violence. Otherwise, such act must be dealt with by law.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2022

A powerful poem of pain that no heart should suffer! .. Beyond #'s! ..++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2022

Dear LeeAnn, I truly Hope you find a safe place! .. You deserve to be treated with a gentle loving kindness! ..

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M. Asim Nehal 23 June 2022

Tough time don't last but tough people do. You are courageous enough to handle it in your own way. I suppose its a your poetic imagination.

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Michael Cochrane 22 June 2022

Dear LeeAnn, any man who hits a lady is not a real man. You are a caring woman who does not deserve such treatment. You will find a man who respects you and cares about you so have courage to move on no matter how difficult.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 June 2022

I hope this poem is a creation of your imagination, and not your real life. Enjoyed reading it.

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Richard Wlodarski 21 June 2022

Respect and admiration for you having the courage to write this very heartwrenching poem! It was a very difficult read. I am praying for you to get the vital professional help that is needed. Then, you'll really set the world on fire with your books of poetry!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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