Sunday, August 14, 2016

The Black Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

You say she is deaf and dumb,
And she's completely blind,
An appealing black beauty,
Sometimes kind, often unkind!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 25 August 2016

You took me on a wondrous trip; then then you brought me back to earth with a dove! Thank you sir!

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Valsa George 14 August 2016

I was wondering who this black beauty must be..... Till the end you left me in absolute suspense... Enjoyed the flow of this interesting poem!

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Khalid Saifullah 14 August 2016

A nice and unique description of nature.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 August 2016

A beautiful personification of nature............................................

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Kelly Kurt 14 August 2016

An eloquent and even moving description!

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