The Black Comments

The title of the poem appropriately represents the text. Nice choice. 'The universe is clearly affirming, this twilight is opaque.' - certainly, the best two lines of the poem.

Wow, I've read a handful of your poems and now I must stop and comment. You're a very powerful and talented writer/poet; your rhymes and rhythms reminds me of some of my works. I will read all of your poems in time. Thanks for reading mine.

A beautiful poem and it is awesome also.

It's good that you chose to keep one rhyme a constant in the poem; that'll always make the black a little more impending. It appears clichéd at points so you might want to look out for that. My favourite line is definitely: this twilight is opaque. It sits in the middle like the heavy thickness it is. I like that.