Monday, April 1, 2013

The Bitter End Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I was transparent the world could see
The little girl and the lion in me
Sometimes i wonder can god tell us apart
Does he see the anger that blankets my heart?
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Rebecca Dalmaso
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Kelvin Owusu 01 April 2013

wow, elegance and grace, such emotion in your word, some things i could relate, such as a borrowed name. to be saved you must find love within oneself as searching it in others may create a trap door which one can not escape from. i love this piece beautiful

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