Tuesday, December 13, 2016

The Bitter Cold Comments

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When winter comes the temperature quickly drops,
And Halloween candy gets replaced with cough drops.
Sweaters come out of hiding, as do scarves and hats,
mittens and gloves are unearthed like lost artifacts.
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Elena Plotkin
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Bri Edwards 14 December 2016

favorite lines so far (love the boots waiting to march) : Boots stand guard by the door waiting for orders to march, Coats thick and furry, have you barely fitting through the arch i like the rhyming, especially 'peel/congeal'. ;) i'll put this into December's Section A of my 'monthly' showcase. THANKS. bri :) you weren't exaggerating in the poem, just a tiny bit! ? ? ? i like the point that the air outside of a freezer really COULD be colder than in the freezer. i hope that never happens to me!

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