Wednesday, September 28, 2016

The Birthing Comments

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The rain swiftly flowed down the gutters,
The thunder roared out overhead,
The wind whistled in through the falling leaves
Of the trees that were thought to be dead,
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David Lewis Paget
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 September 2016

Wow amazing n fabulous mod ballad with suspense midway and then a surprising ending. Did it mean that boys are devils in a notty playful way or did she give birth to an unusual creature with horns? ! I wonder. Anyway I enjoyed this birthing poem so much as I recently delivered a baby boy too. Great to read yor excellent poems again. Pls do review my latest poem called Poetry commentary.....

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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