Wednesday, March 25, 2009
The Birth Of Color From Grey (Sonnet #1) Comments
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The world was made of grey
No colors at all
And all I can say
Is that the color shattered on a wall
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7/19/2025 7:28:12 PM # 1.0.0
Very simplistic, yet very nice. Something about it that I like. If you want to create a proper sonnet, though, you must write in iambic pentameter. Which means there must be 10 syllables in each line. You seem to have the iambic part down, now work on the pentameter. Also, it must go in a rhyming patter of ABABCDCDEFEFGG. So you're almost there! Keep it up bro!