Monday, May 7, 2007

The Birth Of An Emotion Comments

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My eyes were glued upon her image... staring endlessly, her delicate touch unknowingly ensnares me...
body and mind frozen, I try to move closer, relentlessly, breathing inconsistent. what could this be?
days passed it seems, still only an inch closer, yet miles i have gone,
a sound, faint..it gets louder; music? No. heart pounding,
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Rain Storm 14 May 2007

i like the end...but the beginning seems somewhat confused. Welcome back P.A.

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