Wednesday, January 4, 2017

The Birth Of A Poem Comments

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When loneliness puts love to shame,
What salient words drip from my pen,
And so the heart, wounded and lame
Dictates its distress with acumen
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 19 December 2019

As i said, the poem is cute, & my previous, naughty comment is cute? ? Line 20 IS what YOU, Lora, do! ! ! OB Nurse to doctor: " This poetess gives birth to a poem NOW! " OB Doctor to nurse: " Yes, i see it as it's slipping from this " Cow" . bri :)

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