The Birds - Tanka Comments

Thank you for sharing this very sweet and lovely poem, you really do capture the innocence of these small creatures of creation : )

To rejoice always, like a bird!

what a magnificent poem? ?

Very insightful! .. Such beauty in these birdies hearts! .. Despite- food is hard to find! .. Such beautiful soul written into this! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

Yet I see the birds Singing and sweetly tweeting

part1 / Our beloved poet is very supportive of nature and sees all things as they are there unchanged if the evils of human beings are get away from them, here the bird and its sweet voice is a symbol of nature including creatures,

part 2/ and represents the power of good in the universe, well done our delicate poet for this master piece

Birds are a symbol of cheerfulness. When the world is immersing in darkness birds keep themselves happy forgetting to get to the next meal. Quite fabulous dear RMJ

We ought to take learnings from birds, they are always thankful despite they are hungry.. Most refreshening this morn. Thank you dear great Poetess.

Rereading this gem, enriches my heart, each time I read this, it is just a bit different than earlier, lies herein (rereading) the great secret of our happiness? Learning from small things (the birds) to achive greater things? We will be shocked of the facts of what we really can.

We could learn a lot from birds! 5 stars and to my List.

Brilliant Tanka, Oh I missed it.5***

And we! n Always making things worse than they really have to be. Your poem is so complete and so deep. Loved it!

So true! Birds' life is not a song, and yet they sing, When things go wrong, Stoic little feathered things, Worth every word of your sweet and lovely song..

Fabulous....Sweet.

Like this gorgeous Tanka ought human beings too. Excellently presented 5 Stars full! A brevity but the meaning is deeper than you might read. Very enjoyable read and we can ponder about deeper.

Beautiful work! Thanks for sharing...5 stars.

Wishing for this beautiful world of tranquillity......to stars

Birds singing so sweetly - a heavenly world of peace and contentment.....Beautiful Rose...

beautifully true Bravo!