The Birds - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Birds - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Darkness greets the world
Humans counteract with force
Yet I see the birds
Singing and sweetly tweeting
Despite food is hard to find.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 23 September 2021

Fabulous....Sweet.

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Sandra Feldman 24 September 2021

So true! Birds' life is not a song, and yet they sing, When things go wrong, Stoic little feathered things, Worth every word of your sweet and lovely song..

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Sandra Feldman 24 September 2021

And we! n Always making things worse than they really have to be. Your poem is so complete and so deep. Loved it!

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2021

Brilliant Tanka, Oh I missed it.5***

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 October 2021

We could learn a lot from birds! 5 stars and to my List.

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Isadora Quagmire 03 June 2025

Thank you for sharing this very sweet and lovely poem, you really do capture the innocence of these small creatures of creation : )

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Rob Lamberton 05 February 2023

To rejoice always, like a bird!

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Nabakishore Dash 03 June 2022

what a magnificent poem? ?

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2021

Very insightful! .. Such beauty in these birdies hearts! .. Despite- food is hard to find! .. Such beautiful soul written into this! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

Yet I see the birds Singing and sweetly tweeting

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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