The Birds Of Passage Comments

simply a brilliant poem. nice rhymes and sweet reading...10

there is something quite mystical in this one...nice write

sweet poem.............lots of wisdom......well penned

Brevity is beautiful. The wings of these birds are dipped in sunlight. Warm regards, Sandra

through these words I can the see the birds soaring high in the skies of realization

very nice poem... every word make ir almost perfect. great talent in here. best wishes, ana

Ver nice, look forward to reading more of your work. Kind Regards

Persian, you are always an interesting deep read. Of late, I've thought of humans as blind inhabitants of a sparkling habitat. Some awaken to the realization that opening up, looking about, engaging with others and nature is a must, the only way to live and learn. Thank you, Carol

very well written 10/10

great piece, an interesting meaning that you offer here..

A well penned poem, my friend. Thanks Richard

meaningful poem.. after years torments finally had seen the light...10

Very beautiful.I can see the birds and souls in flight.A ten from me.Peace.

nice poem thanks for sharing -10 anjali

In interstellar space.. ....................................... Fine this a phrase... Very beautiful poems... 10........ / Thanks for sharing./ Best wishes, Tsira

All in all, this is a well written poem. I liked the first verse, but must confess I did not understand the second verse, particularly the ending line. Carl.

a fine poem... i like the flow of it when read aloud, and the rhyme is exact. though light and easy, it has some depth in the thoughts. very good.

I can feel softness and peace in your poem well writin.... +10

A lovely inspired (inspiring?) poem which aims to lead to the light :) 10!

that we r those birds of passage flying into the nomadic nights...