Wednesday, June 28, 2006

The Birdbath Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s empty now-
though not if you consider
that absence can fill a vessel.
The rains have not come for weeks, love—
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Uriah Hamilton 13 July 2006

You took symbols of joy and made them sing a sad but beautiful song...your birds break the heart...but who knows where healing begins?

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Duncan Wyllie 06 July 2006

I have to say it, this is so brilliantly done, something about the statement that sets a deep connecting here Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan x

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Wade Greenway 28 June 2006

Powerful poem. The more that I read it the more it moves me. Well done. Curious to find deeper meanings of people's poetry. Talk to me...

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