Thursday, April 3, 2008

***the Bird Tree Comments

Rating: 2.9

For the large flock of tri - colored blackbirds
Who travel through each spring to these lovely hollows.
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Debora Short
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Ivor Hogg 18 May 2008

accurate observations recorded so laerly I can envisage that splendid tree although I am unfamiliar with that species of bird I have seen our native starlings performing the same ritual

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 April 2008

dear debora, your poetry are of intellectual type. good write. i will keep reading.

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Is this '''Debora's Double Our Pleasure Night'''? lol! Yir masterpiece cloned itself....talk about the reflection of nayure ! ....Excellent Work, lass... Another imageful gem-pen, indeed...As if i expected anything less! P.S...Is it possible that while writing this upon the apex of Mountaintop Cottage, that yir' written words echoed along with yir' voice...lol...(Sorry, my dear...the child in me has been un-corked...stand clear & far) ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Scarlett Treat 03 April 2008

Debora, as always, your beautiful Mountain Cottage Poetry brings with it more of a sense of peace and calm than just about any I have ever read. It always is written from a sense of 'being there, ' and there is never anything phony or made-up about it. Makes me want to come there again, in every season, just to soak in such peace and harmony.

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