The Bird Sings Comments

Yes, indeed only birds live a free life and is why they sing joyfully to live a nice life! Men have to learn how to divert their attention from all ills they have to suffer through out their life! Nice to read your poem! All the best!

We eagerly pine for happiness But that doesn’t come in our way We swot hard day and night To make life happy and gay. We grow jealous when bird sings In a melodious tone happiness is a great gift of God....... only when we relate ourselves to God , happines comes into our soul..... thank you dear poet. for this great poem. dev

A Beautiful Sad Touching Poem Of Deep Heart! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

Death terrorizes us every moment: have your read Denial of Death by Ernest Becker?

Wowww...so beautiful. Your words come straight from the heart n touch the reader deeply. Great work. Songs of birds n the sorrows of man are juxtaposed so well.

simple but beautiful. thanks for sharinf

This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing, with passion.

I listen to the sweet songs of the birds. A nice poem.

We sit here and moan; because of the wickedness around. Nice work.

great poem......oh to be the bird blistfully unaware of the brutality in the world.

Quiet unknown of the fact that The world is full with agony and pain, We grow jealous when bird sings In a melodious tone And in lovely sunny day We sit here and moan. Contrasts of the lovely bird song And the hard realities of life that we face everyday. Very well written conveying the pain and sufferings. Thank you dear Poet. tony

You have set in the contrast beautifully. I reminds me of Shelley's 'Ode to Skylark'. Teach me half the gladness That your heart must know Such harmonious madness From my lips would flow The world would listen me then, as I am listening now

How lucky that the bird can sing in harmony with his world. Oblivious to the evil and anger in the human world. If only we could all be as happy as the birds.

Wonderful poem. Life often seems so unfriendly and difficult but if we take time to listen to the birds and take a look at the skies, life is beautiful. Not easy but beautiful...

Lovely, well written poetry Truly when birds sings a real melody...10

Birds sing...another gift to soften man's heart at the wonder of creation! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Fleeting time moves hurriedly And silently retards our growth.............. matured look. Thanks for your conscious-level-writing.

Great write. The birds sing because they are determined to make their abode peaceful but man.........

Last three lines.. So nice finishing! Love the poem.. Thank you

The bird sings innocently ignorant of the fact the people who live in this world are terrorized each moment and live in agony and pain. A comparison most effectively and beautifully brought out in this bird poem.