The Bird Set Free Comments

Emotional poem.. I read this a lot of times feeling so teary so I forgot to comment until now.. The poem is so light yet heavy.. So sad yet acceptable.. Keep up the good writing.. Free you emotions in your writes.

As I was reading..I felt myself as a feather slowly falling from the sky...light..serene..as I land on the ground, joy fills me quickly as I see the dove soaring in the sky..farther...farther...I watch this with tears in my eyes, but knowing that there will come a time where my sight could not reach the dove anymore..I take my last step back..and slowly tur around..a bright beam in my face. Great poem! Keep writing! -softsmile-

keep writing to touch others' hearts.. =)

a beautiful tribute to grandmothers out there. you're very good also in expressing emotions. keep writing, dear.: -)