Monday, October 7, 2013

The Bird Perched By Comments

Rating: 4.8

The small bird perches,
Up so high
Where it overlooks
Some amazing things
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Hathy Tong
COMMENTS
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 November 2013

A great poem even in metaphor and ends with a heavenly touch! Kudos! I hope u do review my latest poem too.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 04 November 2013

It was a pleasure reading about the small bird, the big bird and the old bird. Lovely verse...10!

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Unwritten Soul 22 October 2013

You mix the words, atmosphere in a good way...it is a unique and carefully written poem..niceeee_SOul

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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2013

The three situations beautifully portrayed.

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