The small bird perches,
Up so high
Where it overlooks
Some amazing things
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It was a pleasure reading about the small bird, the big bird and the old bird. Lovely verse...10!
You mix the words, atmosphere in a good way...it is a unique and carefully written poem..niceeee_SOul
A great poem even in metaphor and ends with a heavenly touch! Kudos! I hope u do review my latest poem too.