Sunday, January 28, 2007

The Bird In The Cage Comments

Rating: 3.5

how can you enslave me?
when I was born for the open blue sky?
how can you shut me in this gilded cage
where I am trapped and cannot fly?
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Manasvi Kulshrestha 08 July 2021

Amazing poem, full of emotions... Loved reading it

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Asma Bahrainwala 28 January 2007

a lovely poem, Arti... i have written something similar...pls do check out my poem 'Let Me Fly'... love, Asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 January 2007

No man nor animal of good heart should be prohibited freedom. A very nice piece of work, here, Arti...A wee bit prosesque, in structure, but yet still a true poetic gem... ~F. j. R. ~

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