Friday, July 18, 2008

The Bird Has Now Flown Comments

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Started so tiny, so small, so in need
Wanted it all, infantile greed
Curious and interested, hands everywhere
Teach me! Tell me! Show me!
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Rowan Truebody
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Sidi Mahtrow 18 July 2008

The New Bird So wet and ugly Really depressing, When the new one arrived In need of some dressing. But with time it learned To stand on two feet And was once and forever, Hail fellow well meet. But getting out of the nest Was soon the new challenge To go with the rest He flew, to our chagrin. The Bird now flew To a new beginning With false starts aplenty, not few, And he lost more than he was winning. Where it will all end Makes no sense to us all. But it it's time to recognize That we must let him fall. s (enjoyed your poem which prompted my reply.)

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