Tuesday, March 25, 2014

The Bird Flew Away Comments

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Whenever
I feel suffocated
Inside the walls of my room
I often step out
...
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V P Mahur
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Valsa George 26 March 2014

We really grieve the disappearance of our feathered friends! When we are in blue, how a garden with birds chirping on trees and bees bussing around flowers revive our dull spirits...! A beautiful write! !

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 25 March 2014

You are true that birds are flying away due to deforestation and cropping of new buildings!

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Adeline Foster 25 March 2014

Good poem, I commend you for your effort in English. The poem expresses your feelings very well. You will like mine - Mitigation - Adeline

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Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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