Monday, August 20, 2018
The Bird Cried Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I heard a bird cry for its mom
It fell from the nest
For hours it cried
As other birds flew by
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Seeing Eye
20 August 2018
I liked the poem except for the last line. That line needs changing.
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/27/2025 5:11:05 PM # 1.0.0
Yes nature does what needs to be done While mankind does it for fun.......so true. We have to enjoy fruits as per our Karma(actions) . Nature does as per God's law. Though the story in this poem is sad yet it bears a great theme. A beautiful poem touchingly presented.10