The Bird Came Back In The Cage Comments

Now during at this old age I decided to break my relationship with him and go back home. To my surprise the touch was in the cage. I don't know what the touch is! But now I shall write Him for him.....touching lines with honest words...superb Akhtar

When we think that He has wandered away from us and that we shall never see Him, it is then He makes His appearance! Beautifully summarized a man's quest after God!

white on white intrigues me. IN: I shall not let him go to you, I know you will pollute this touch. AND: I decided to break my relationship with him...........i wonder who/what you and him refer to. favorite lines: With tears when I said good bye to him he came back as the rains, I saw him flowing in the rivers and I chased him but he vanished in the seas. bri :)

i like some of the images, but if i had not seen god as a topic, i probably would not know the poem concerned 'god'. i'm still not following the story, even with the 'god' clue. i assume Him in the last line refers to God, but what about the him? flied, though it would seem correct to many non-native speakers of English, should instead be flew.