Friday, August 4, 2006

The Biker Chick Rag Comments

Rating: 5.0

So long farewell goodbye
your tears won’t buy me a beer
Someday when your young again I’ll
come home again
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Stephen S. Yeandle
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Francesca Johnson 04 August 2006

With Neil Young's 'Unknown Legend' playing in the background, this poem almost became a movie for me! A wonderful read. Thanks, Stephen. Love, Fran xx

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Mary Nagy 04 August 2006

This had two reactions from me...it made me laugh at the absurdity of it. The visual...priceless! I found it pretty funny. But, then, I thought about todays world and saw that this could actually be true! So many women are leaving their husbands and children behind while they go out and live the wild life. (mine did!) It's actually pretty common now for kids to be raised by their dad instead of their mom. So, I liked this poem on two separate levels. Great work! Sincerely, mary

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Stephen S. Yeandle

Stephen S. Yeandle

New York, NY
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