Monday, November 5, 2018

The Bike Path Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a clear October day I peddle all my cares away
Through the vineyard, down the hill, around the curve, beside the mill
My bike is light with gears so spaced to conquer all the hills I face
My tires planted on the road, thin but strong to bear the load
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Richard Lackman
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Bipasha D 03 May 2019

A beautiful piece of poetry. I loved the imagery, the rhyme and rhythm.

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Richard. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 05 November 2018

I've always wanted to go on long bike rides taking in all that nature Has to offer, one day I may just do it. A great poem.

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Richard Lackman

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