Friday, June 18, 2010

The Bigger Picture Comments

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The wind blows slow and hard
As the rain drops like tears from the Lord
The sky is black like closed minds
And the earth is standing still like paused time
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Craig Mize
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Courtney Shanahan 18 June 2010

Great poem. Good use of simlies and metaphors. Good work

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