The Big Surprise Comments

Your surreal poem describes a vertical spiritual travel.The rainbow becomes the symbol of the divine way, because you want to reach Heaven, where you may meet the Angels.I think that your poem develops a fundamental theme about life and death and its message is to surpass the pain of the matter's death for the life of the spirit. To see the unseen -this is the great message coming from a great poet-thank you, dear Romeo

I love this poem with a surprise yet impeccably enchanting ending. Still smilling as I am writing this. This beats rolling in the dirt as a wolf. Love ya Romeo.

That special person is worth more than a pot of gold - good one Romeo.