Thursday, October 13, 2005

The Big Five Comments

Rating: 4.9

S. is for short, too short to see.
A. is for active happy and free.
M.is for money the green she doesn’t have.
M.is for many tears she had
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Lynn samantha
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Steffi Webster 20 October 2005

This is a good poem and I like the way you used the letters of your name to spell out what you're like. I might try this. I have used this technique before but not with my name. Maybe I'll give it a go. Thanks for the idea. Check out some more of my poems I liketo hear your opinion.

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