The Big Blue Poem by Shaun Cronick

The Big Blue

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I clear my mind,
Admire the view.
Take in true beauty,
So vast so blue.

This mighty ocean,
It stretches out.
Fills the horizon,
Without a doubt.

It is at calm,
But can so turn.
A deceptive element,
Cause for concern.

Never venture out,
On a stern day.
You stake your life,
The price to pay.

Monday, November 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,deception,ocean,ocean waves,warning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 11 November 2019

Very nice poem with some very good advise.

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Shaun Cronick 13 November 2019

Thank you for your kind comment Sandra. Any comment from your good self is most welcome and respected. Thank you so much. Take care.

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