The Big Bang (Journal Entry) Comments

Nice piece of work here pulls you in and keeps you there from beginning to end a great read.

This kept my attention - tight all the way through. Nicely done. -chuck

The wonder of sadness! ! , The joy of death! ! The poetry of emotional failure! ! A young lady bears her soul with art! ! !

Wow, this poem dove me over the ledge! Great all the way through! ! Brian

another magnificent poem, Amberlee. and as i sit here frustrated by my apparent lack of creativity, you make me all the more envious. Jake