Thursday, May 16, 2013

The Biased Regret Comments

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Do I interrupt your solitary privacy,
When I pour on your horrible territories,
With hot steaming tears, cold shoulders,
Collecting all those thinking free garbage,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 May 2013

The Biased Regret / solitary privacy, your horrible territories, vixen canals, blow away your wigs, matrimonial with shroud, and the last three lines very nice poem with the reality

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a good question, Gajanan. once people are abandoned for a reason or many (money means poverty and luxury) other people also try to distant themselves from them, until and unless the abandoned people secure enough courage to come out of their problems, though one or two good samaritans may be around to help them, but once people are abandoned, they not only feel like that they are abandoned by everyone, in reality they will be abandoned and neglected for a short period of time.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 May 2013

I like the poem from the core of my heart, But I failed to understand 'abandoned are always abandoned by everyone ' nothing is useless in this world, nothing is abandoned by all. feel my words. thanks for the poem.

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