Sunday, September 9, 2012

The Better Gems Comments

Rating: 4.0

What's better than gold?
A heart of gold and a golden rule
Thus donot over the mined thing drool.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Tom Allport 26 October 2019

A gem of a write that is more precious than gold.....wonderfully penned.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 June 2017

'What's better than silver? The hope that every cloud has a silver lining Even miners they don't enjoy the mining' - This is the stanza that I liked most. Nice poem.

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Ken E Hall 05 June 2015

the best gem of a person and your so right and maybe a little sparkler for the wedding ring...nice words in the meanings of this gem of a poem...regards

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Allotey Abossey 21 May 2015

Very Fascinating... Good one there...

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Howard Johnson 26 May 2013

An enjoyable read thanks for sharing readability

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Graham Thompson 24 May 2013

What is better than gold? You are - and the way you represent true and humble humanity. Loved the poem.

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Shahzia Batool 30 October 2012

Beautiful poemZaynub! it is really beautiful! you have a style to develop the logic and arguments behind your point....the phrase gem of a person is rightly used for your purpose...

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Hans Vr 15 October 2012

Fully agree with the wonderful ideas expressed in this beautiful poem

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Hazel Durham 14 October 2012

I loved this poem so original with a great message!

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Anthony Wickham 20 September 2012

very nice..keep up the good work.

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Unwritten Soul 17 September 2012

You are so right Zaynub, you absolutely right....these things just for temporary not even give a meaning for a hungry people, compared to the food in difficult time, and yet humanity cannot be paid by all amounts of gems...but the heart of gold is the real gems for eternity, which it display peace as it shine...thanks for reading me, wish you the best_Soul

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Saadat Tahir 16 September 2012

yes...gem of a person..... but where does one find one....it is an increasingly materialistic and insane world.... wish you good luck.. :) nice poem liked reading cheers

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 September 2012

the gems are compared with living and non living things and their characters! Good Try! keep it up!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 14 September 2012

A sweet poem of sensual experience with a Keatsean touch.Fine.

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Kevin Patrick 11 September 2012

Such beauty shines in this touching work that celebrates the natural wonders of our world. Great stuff

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Francisca Darko 11 September 2012

So good! I love the links to real life and especially the way you ended it

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Valerie Dohren 11 September 2012

Lovely poem - there are many jewels other than those minerals which we value so much. You may like to read mine entitled Jewels.

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Stevie Taite 09 September 2012

Beautiful connections to the world of things precious to us! Keep it up!

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