The Betrayers Comments

Excellent work, Thomas!

betrayers will feast on themselves. ----yes true

I think it should be 'I`ll' and not Iii. And though you state some facts, there is little or almost nothing taking the side of a poem or poem or poetic lines here. To write poetry is a serious thing, and not all things go.

An excellent poem that presents the truth.

At least Jesus knew what was coming. Jesus is God, so all the same, He always knows your words before saying that. Enjoyed having read this. Thank you for sharing, Sylvia FC Dutch poetess

An incisive and powerful write. M