Sunday, March 13, 2011

The Betrayal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today the drapes, for once,
have been drawn and, at last,
the sun has lit up the pine-dark interiors
of that day you poured me wine at supper,
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Joanne Monte
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Susan Williams 11 October 2018

still clinging to the one ray of light in the window as though it could reach into those dark corners and deflect the desire for vengeance. - - - an amazing talent at work in this poem- - 10+++++++++++ amd onto fav list

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Amitava Sur 28 October 2013

A very well written poem detailing the situation.

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Ken E Hall 10 October 2013

Very original look at vengeance makes one read it again...powerful...regards

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Heather Wilkins 04 October 2013

a good poem Joanne. well written

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 14 September 2013

Nice. VIVID] I enjoyed this poem.

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