The Betrayal Comments

But still the land like a mother it was, Gave my life back like a child long lost The clear blue sky was the shade I had The fragrant soil was the mat I got. u young man r a beautiful poet GOD BLESS READ MY POEM MOMS SMILES AND READ MORE YOU R A POETIC SEED GOD WILL BLESS INDEED

I regret it now when the time has passed That I couldn't get it, I couldn't understand That this divine beauty, the sacred soil Was nothing much in sight but truly my motherland. - - - - -lovely words and beautiful thought.

I regret it now when the time has passed That I couldn't get it, I couldn't understand That this divine beauty, the sacred soil Was nothing much in sight but truly my motherland. - - - - -lovely words and beautiful thought.

This poem conveys a special message for people of Pakistan and India. Such people simply think of money, and they brain drain to a land unknown to them. If all the highly-qualified people from Pakistan and India start brain-draining, then what will become of Pakistan's and India's future? After all, it was Pakistan or India who made those people learn how to read and write. Those highly qualified people are standing in their majestic positions just because of their motherland, not the land where they are seeking for money, money, and money. A beautiful poem indeed. Do read my new poem ''Sympathy'' and do leave your comments :)

A lovely poem well penned with insight to capture the conviction of the poet. Rather we remain patriotic than commit crime against our motherland. It a nice piece with powerful message. Thanks for sharing and keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Betraying motherland is really matter of sad. Thought provoking poem shared.