The Betrayal Comments

Ha! Very humorous and smart write! I am one of those who believe we all have our day when we're meant to leave this world and that's that! Granted, I know a healthy lifestyle would probably make us feel better but in the end I don't believe it keeps us living longer! Great poem!

very well written thanks for sharing! ! ! I would greatly appreciate if you would check out some of mine, and leave any worthy advise for me as a writer! ! thanks again!