Sunday, July 29, 2012

The Best You Ever Had Comments

Rating: 4.8

All the trust we've built together,
Bonds developed from the start,
Have somehow been ripped in two,
Like you ripped apart my heart.
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Alan W. Jankowski
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Roseann Shawiak 21 August 2015

Poignantly portrayed through raw emotion, striking sorrow into your heart so cruelly without a thought about your feelings at all. Heart wrenching poem indeed. Thank you very much for sharing. My heart goes out to you. RoseAnn

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Bharati Nayak 10 August 2015

Nicely portrayed heart touching poem of heart break.

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Aleksandra Spaseska 29 July 2012

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Very raw and straight forward.

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Alan W. Jankowski

Alan W. Jankowski

Perth Amboy, New Jersey
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