*the Best Way To Make Love (1.01) Comments

I think that maybe dreaming and writing poems is not the best way to make love.

Love your style of writing, your poem seems to start out as a seed just planted, grows and blossoms into a beautiful bouquet of reasoning. Very well written. Your imagery is superb, as is your rhythm. Thank you for sharing, you do have a way with words. Like this one very much. RoseAnn

I like the style of your writing, your rendering of the story brought out the essence of the poem. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.