My brother is writing a poem;
He's been writing it for years.
It'll be the best one ever,
Of that I have no fears.
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the best review of a poem (though non-existing yet) ever written. Liked it! ! !
O.K., I just found out the name of the spring in the picture. It's Grand Prismatic Spring. It’s the third-largest hot spring in the world and the largest in America.
This well written and wonderfully descriptive poem reminds me of the word procrastination. He's going to get it done, but it sounds like it will never really be done. Great plans are not worth much if they stay plans instead of action. I hope he finishes the poem so you do get to read it.
thanks for the poet's note. Kim, I’d glad you clarified (sort of) that the “best poem ever” refers to the poem-to-be from your brother. otherwise I would have figured you meant one of mine, and I would, of course, wish to know which one of MY many GREAT POEMS you were referring to. you managed some good rhymes. yes, let’s not hold our breaths! of course, if it is a ‘real stinker’, we may need to hold our breaths. do you own any scuba gear, as in oxygen tanks? THANKS for offering this to be in my/our August showcase for PH poets on my site. it shall be a fine addition. bri :)
The picture is of one of the thermal springs in Yellowstone National Park. I don't remember the name of the spring.
I love it! But please tell us about the picture. It is beautiful.
Wow a lovely super encouragement for your brothers fine poetry. I enjoyed the mention of everest n Pacific. Kudos. Nice to read u again. I hope u read my latest too on Tanzania.
Incredible picture and what a beautiful poem. You do have a wonderful relationship with your brother. Thank You
You have aroused the reader's curiosity to the hilt. We don't know about how the poem of your brother turns out to be. What we know is that you have shared with us a truly amazing poem. Thanks, Kim.
a 100's not old for you, Kim. Resume buying green. Have a look at Banjo Paterson's 'The Pearl Diver'
ur brother is excellent he confides in you hoping you will hold on for longgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg