The week comes to an end
It gives reasons to look back and smile at you
It gives reasons to look back and smile to the world
It gives you reasons to look back and probably regret
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I like the musical bit of the last stanza, good theme to end the week. Great poetess you score a 10
Great opening stanza Rose. Thanks for sharing. You have my 10
A good write Rose, i like that despite varying school of thoughts we ought to 'Learn to make lemonades but don't be its constant consumer'
Wao! thanks for sharing this, quite holistic i like the reminder that we have to keep on trudging at all cost. When dreams wither-your life withers Ensure that you work on rekindling dreams When hope is gone life becomes useless Ensure that you work on rekindling it When the inner spirit dies You die physically, emotionally and mentally
The best of best was a good read for me. You built this poem well Rose